Matt Bellamy

Hi! I felt kind of bad for you because you don't have any reviews on this but I think it's mainly because it's so long. I would suggest maybe splitting ...

Hey Ben! Sorta disagree that Britain makes the best comedies, I'm partial to a good American sitcom myself. ;) I think you should get rid of the ellipse at the ...

This is really good. I'm not sure what relevance the first stanza has to the rest of the poem, though. I love the third stanza - it's so innocent and ...

Critiquing lyrics is hard! I don't find this particularly original. It is relatable, which is what I look for in a song, but I think you could say what you ...

I adore this. The imagery and the words you choose to describe it with are really original and interesting. I love how every part is a snapshot of something different ...

I like this but there are parts of it that I just don't understand and they seem a little unnecessary. Let's have a look: Everybody has a reason a reason ...

I quite like this poem but I'm not sure what your point is. What exactly are you trying to say with this poem? I mean, I like the way it's ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS! Make sure you review other people's work as well as posting your own, as that way you'll get more critiques. :) This is pretty good. You ...

This is an interesting poem. I like how it leaves the reader wondering and able to come to their own conclusions about what it really is, and that it could ...

This is a very emotional and well-written piece, I really like it. However there are a couple of things I think could be better: So what do I do? I ...

Hey! I quite like this but I have a few nitpicks so I'll take it line by line: Like at war, in love everything’s fair. Then again, they say, love ...

Hi! Well done on trying this style of poetry, personally I find it very difficult and don't like writing like that at all, but you've done it quite well. I'm ...

This is interesting. I have a few nitpicks - you spelt "definitely" wrong, so make sure you use a spell-check before you post. Also, the second line sounds unnecessary. I ...

I really like this. I think it flowed well and the rhyming was great. At times I felt forced into saying a line in a certain way, but only once ...

Hi! I quite liked this. I like the way you combined short and longer lines - normally this might disrupt the flow of the poem but here I think it ...